The Ancient Ones Prophecy of the Ilat edition by CE Allan Literature Fiction eBooks
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Learning the truth about your past and your destiny can be more daunting than living in ignorance. Maybe that’s why people say ignorance is bliss…
This is something twenty year old Sara Fuller quickly learns after she reunites with Niobe Freeman, after being in hiding for fourteen years. Niobe holds the secrets to a past she cannot remember and offers her the keys to a future where Sara can live the life she wants to live. When Sara inherits everything that is hers and lives the life she had always dreamt of, the unspeakable powers that turned her world upside down discover that she’s still alive. Sara discovers the dreadful truth about her parents deaths and a prophecy that will determine the very fate of the planet. Sara’s only hope of saving our world is to fulfill the inconceivable plan Niobe has set before her. Can Sara overcome her greatest fears to achieve the impossible? Can she accept the truth of her fate?
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The Ancient Ones Prophecy of the Ilat edition by CE Allan Literature Fiction eBooks
The Ancient Ones: Prophecy of the Ilat has so much promise; it’s just unfortunate that the author didn’t even both to run the manuscript through grammar and spell check before publishing – thus my rating of 3-1/2 stars. The story and characters are good, but the abundance of errors – punctuation, tense, typos, etc. – is more than a little distracting.Even though many of the errors were cringe-worthy, I continued to read the book from beginning to end because the story was interesting. The likable (and evil) characters and the multi-dimensional setting made it compelling. The ending, though, felt a little rushed, which was odd since the rest of the book was so detailed. There was also a point where I felt there was something major missing. Unfortunately this happened during the dénouement and I am sure something important to understanding things was not included or was so vague that it wasn’t easily understood. (Please Mr. Allen, review the manuscript and fix this and the other issues.)
Overall, the story is worth the effort but could be so much more if the author would just put a little more effort into it – though it would be better if he gave it to a professional editor (that could push this story into 5-star territory, in my opinion).
If you can deal with the errors, it’s worth giving this book a chance.
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The Ancient Ones Prophecy of the Ilat edition by CE Allan Literature Fiction eBooks Reviews
New Jersey author C.E. Allan was born in London, England. He studied Clinical Hypnosis and his passion is for adult, high action-adventure, fantasy, sci-fi novels have brought him to the point of writing his dreams. THE ANCIENT ONES is his debut novel. From the `quick facts' he offers such quips as the fact that he is `caffeine dependant organism' and a proud Nerd/Geek. He also seems to have a terrific sense of humor!
Before Allan's writing begins he places the following before our eyes `I am Enki! They stand before me, praising me. Enki, the lord of the destinies. I am the first born of Anu. I am a great storm rising over the great earth, I am the great lord of the land. I am the principal among all rulers, the father of all the foreign lands. I am the big brother of the gods, I bring prosperity to perfection. I am the seal-keeper of heaven and earth. I am the wisdom and understanding of all the foreign lands. - Sumerian Tablets, 4000 B.C.' He then opens his story with a Prologue in 1998 in Paris, France - so many characters and events that remaining in orbit is a challenge. An example (and an important indication of the style of writing and references to what lies ahead) `He entered the chateau and was able to feel the presence of High Lord Daemonium, which made him lose control of his body. His heart started to beat rapidly, his breathing became short, his legs, and his hands trembled, his palms became clammy, and his stomach did summersaults and flips continually. Every footstep seemed to echo, as he walked towards the presence. The door to the grand living room was open. Inside he could hear crying. Adrianna, Tianna. Collins ran inside, to see Tianna lying unconscious on the white marble floor, her small face in a pool of blood. Collins collapsed to his knees noticing the blood coming from her mouth. Standing by her was the High Lord, the most formidable being he had ever seen. He looked like a giant, standing as tall as the ceiling. His muscular frame was monstrous. There were scars over his knuckles. He wore what looked like black armor with intricate ancient gold patterns underneath a dark purple royal robe with the same embellishments. His eyes looked as black as coal underneath his hood, his black beard falling to his chest. High Lord Daemonium removed his hood, looking down at Collins. His black eyes became green. At the other end of the room Collins saw Adrianna naked, curled in a ball, shaking uncontrollably. Blood was smeared on her face, her arms, and her legs.'
The past has been established on several levels now and we are 14 years later in Venefica Academy, Eden, and gradually Allan unwinds his coiled story, as he states in his synopsis 'Learning the truth about your past and your destiny can be more daunting than living in ignorance. Maybe that's why people say ignorance is bliss...This is something twenty-year-old Sara Fuller quickly learns after she reunites with Niobe Freeman, after being in hiding for fourteen years. Niobe holds the secrets to a past she cannot remember and offers her the keys to a future where Sara can live the life she wants to live. When Sara inherits everything that is hers and lives the life she had always dreamt of, the unspeakable powers that turned her world upside down discover that she's still alive. Sara discovers the dreadful truth about her parents deaths and a prophecy that will determine the very fate of the planet. Sara's only hope of saving our world is to fulfill the inconceivable plan Niobe has set before her. Can Sara overcome her greatest fears to achieve the impossible? Can she accept the truth of her fate?' And as with all fine science fiction fantasy writing Allan ends his story with a revelation well worth the wait.
C.E. Allan has the makings of a fine writer. His novel is very long and overly complex but his ideas are solid and his language is rich. It will be interesting to follow his journey in to this rarefied field. Grady Harp, July 15
1998 Paris, France. Joseph Collins is forced to rush home after receiving a disturbing phone call. When he returns home, he finds the guards around his family’s home slaughtered in the most gruesome way. Inside, he finds his family being held hostage by High Lord Daemonium. To say the high lord is a demon is to put it mildly the creature is the essence of evil and is capable to horrifying destruction. Before his eyes, Collins is forced to watch as his family is butchered. In his last moments, Collins wonders why Niobe, the warrior charged with protecting his daughter, did not save from this horrible fate. Years later Tianna, Joseph Collins’s daughter, is living on a distant planet and attending school. When she learns that Niobe is once again returning to see her, she is thrilled. When Niobe arrives, she embraces Tianna and tells her that she is going to uncover the truth of her family’s murder. Unfortunately, when she reaches out to others for help Niobe reveals that Tianna is still alive. The news spreads quickly and soon Niobe is on the run again from armies and monsters seeking to finish the job that was started in Paris so long ago.
The Ancient Ones The Prophecy of the Ilat by C. E. Allen plunges the reader into a world of different dimensions and far away worlds. Personally, this novel excited me because it mentions the planet Nibiru, which is famed as being a lost or phantom planet in our solar system. The novel progresses quickly and takes the reader through different dimensions and worlds very quickly. At times, the storyline is a challenge to follow as some characters are introduced quickly and vanish just as fast. However, overall the story moved well and is enjoyable. For a debut novel, The Ancient Ones is an excellent offering.
The Ancient Ones Prophecy of the Ilat has so much promise; it’s just unfortunate that the author didn’t even both to run the manuscript through grammar and spell check before publishing – thus my rating of 3-1/2 stars. The story and characters are good, but the abundance of errors – punctuation, tense, typos, etc. – is more than a little distracting.
Even though many of the errors were cringe-worthy, I continued to read the book from beginning to end because the story was interesting. The likable (and evil) characters and the multi-dimensional setting made it compelling. The ending, though, felt a little rushed, which was odd since the rest of the book was so detailed. There was also a point where I felt there was something major missing. Unfortunately this happened during the dénouement and I am sure something important to understanding things was not included or was so vague that it wasn’t easily understood. (Please Mr. Allen, review the manuscript and fix this and the other issues.)
Overall, the story is worth the effort but could be so much more if the author would just put a little more effort into it – though it would be better if he gave it to a professional editor (that could push this story into 5-star territory, in my opinion).
If you can deal with the errors, it’s worth giving this book a chance.
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